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We just finished reading The Martian Chronicles by Ray Bradbury in my Science Fiction Lit class, and my teacher assigned us the task of writing our own 'Martian chronicle'. I had problems coming up with an idea, so after a while it was just, "oh, fuck it, let's put Theo and Rian in space and see what happens." Which is interesting enough, but the fact our previous novel had been Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?, the tone took a turn for the Philip K. Dick side of Sci Fi. Which is sorta weird, mashing up Bradbury and Dick. Plus the ending's too abrupt, throwing in a bit of Poe thar. ANYWAY. Enjoy.
If I knew you were coming, I would have baked a cake
When she heard the knock on the door of her pre-assembled, Oregon pine house, Theo was ready to inform Mrs. Hathaway that she, too, was all out of sugar, or express her condolences that Mr. Driscoll had been unsuccessful in acquiring funding for his expedition to Deimos, or any other statement of that trivial, mundane variety she had grown accustomed to making in the past four years. Yet as insignificant as her conversation these days were, she took comfort in her isolation. Her desire for normalcy was the whole reason she had relocated, after all, and she now had more of that than she had ever wished. Which was just as well: if one could not find tranquility on Mars, then it was unlikely one ever would.
So, smiling a charming smile, the young woman opened the door, only to have her prepared, pleasant greeting catch in her throat at the sight of her visitor. The man stood stiffly, firmly upright, and was dressed in heavy, dark coloured clothing at total odds with the fashions and the heat. A hat covered his hair, tinted glasses concealed his eyes, and a scarf was wrapped tightly around his face: all this meant that she could not tell precisely who he was, but her horrorstruck reaction implied that, at least subconsciously, she recognized him. And since none of her neighbors had the—
imagination to dress in such senselessly ominous attire, the assumption was this was a man she had known whilst on Earth, which further implied her hard won regularity was soon to be snatched away.
He was the one to break the silence. Though still muffled by his scarf, he enunciated as clearly as was possible, “Hello, Theo.”
“Who are you?” she demanded, twisting behind the door for protection. “What d’you want?”
He did not respond immediately, but instead slumped in a way that indicated she had hurt him. “Can I come in?”
“You didn’t answer my question,” the young woman replied coolly. “Do I know you?”
“Might I come in?” he pressed further.
“You’ll wake the baby.”
This seemed to throw him. “It’s Rian,” he said finally, irritably. “Now let me in.”
Theo’s eyes widened; tranquility was
clearly no longer an option on this planet if he was whom he said he was. Hesitantly, ever so reasonably hesitantly, she asked, “How did you find me?”
“Doesn’t matter. I’m
here, aren’t I? Damn it, Theo—” he reached up with one gloved hand and scratched under his hat. “I won’t ask you again.”
The glasses meant she couldn’t tell if he was really looking at her or not; this seemed important, crucial somehow. Yet eventually, she did step out from behind the door. “Hello, Rian,” she said, quirking a brow. “Won’t you please come in?”
He stepped past her without a word, into the coolness of her standard issue Martian residence. Once inside, he began moving briskly through the quaint, monochromatic rooms, shedding his layers and dumping them artlessly on the California red wood floors. Trailing after him and picking up his clothing, she inquired, “What are you doing?”
“Looking for this
baby,” he responded curtly; though his coat, gloves, jacket, and tie had been removed, his scarf, glasses, and hat remained.
She rolled her eyes. “There is no baby.”
Rian stopped abruptly, so suddenly she bumped into him. Though their collision was minor, their contact minimal, he reeled as if the young woman had deliberately, forcefully shoved him, and began hacking.
“What’s the matter?” She tried to touch him, but he spun out of reach.
“Nothing,” he wheezed between coughs. “Nothing...nothing to do with you. “Why—” he leaned against her metal couch “—why did you. You say there was a baby?”
Kneeling on the floor, Theo firmly grasped his scarf; weakly, he attempted to push her hands away. “To try and dissuade you from entering. Will you be removing this or should I?”
“Don’t, please—”
She began unwinding the thing, despite his increasingly callow protests. With that certain sort of detached curiosity, she asked, “How’s Christian?”
“Dead,” he sighed, matter of factly.
“Oh.”
This didn’t surprise her—true, the boy’s general charm had for the most part kept him safe from the quarrels that had so broken Rian and her, but such traits meant little when one’s planet is falling apart. Had she not already made her peace with never seeing Christian again, perhaps she might feel some sense of loss. Then again, perhaps not.
He had wrapped the scarf many, many layers thick; the dark fabric continued to pile up no matter how viciously she pulled. His ragged breaths, however, were gradually becoming more audible. “And Jemmy?” she continued.
The man shifted position, his keens bent and his back pressed against the couch. “Also dead. As is Darin. And Rosaline. Your mother, my mother, Father, your hus—”
“Is anyone left?” Theo interrupted.
He shrugged. “You are.”
“I don’t count, I’ve been on
Mars.”
“Well, I am. But I
shouldn’t count.”
The young woman paused; she was nearing the end of the scarf, and the closer she got to finishing, the fabric was becoming damp and slightly sticky.
Carefully, she inquired, “What d’you mean, Rian?”
“What do I mean?” he repeated, with a mirthless chuckle. “What do I mean? Tell me—how old am I?”
“You’re twenty six,” she replied automatically. “You’re four years older than I am, always have been.
Laughing again, Rian tugged at the last of his scarf and ripped off his glasses. The sticky substance—as she had expected—was blood: it moistened his cracking lips, reddened his grayed, flaking skin. His eyes were too big, too filmy, and didn’t blink enough as he stared at her.
“No lies, sweetheart,” he cautioned, his voice dry and low now that it was unmuffled. “How long have I existed; that is, how. Old. Am. I.”
Fingering the discarded scarf, she murmured, “Seven years, two months, and nine days old. Don’t ask me the hours or minutes, I don’t know
that much detail.”
He nodded, shaking loose some of his discarded skin. “And I certainly do look it, don’t I?”
Theo smiled, brittlely and too brightly. “When did you find out?”
“Shortly after you left,” he responded pleasantly. “When Father decided he wasn’t going to bother waiting for me to...expire, and had me buried.”
“Yes, that sounds like him. And when you didn’t? Expire, that is.”
“Had my coffin transferred to the attic. Typical Father.” The man shrugged, removing his hat. His hair was so colourless, so wispy, that it seemed she could make a wish and blow it all away with one puff.
Gingerly, she scooted next to him, observing his sporadic twitches, his biological glitches. “Why did you come here, Rian?” she asked.
“I should be dead,” he replied, tearing at his skin. “Four years, that’s all I was supposed to have.”
“I know.”
“Is that why you left when you did?”
After a moment the young woman nodded, rubbing her temples. “That’s—one reason, yes. I didn’t want to watch you die.”
His too wrong eyes struggled to focus on her. “Then what are you doing now?”
“
You came here,” she reminded him bitterly. “This isn’t my fault.”
“I know.”
They continued to sit there, silent save for his ragged breathing. The sun cast shadows about the room as the day went on, and there was a knock on the door at some point; but they made no move to answer it, and eventually the would-be caller went away. The moons came up, and she had just remembered poor Mr. Driscoll when he murmured, “Theo?”
“Mmm?”
“I have nowhere else to go.”
She hesitated, searching for the right words; finding none, the young woman leaned forward and—gently, sweetly—kissed her android of a half-brother.
“You know what this means?” she whispered into his biologically manufactured ear.
“What?”
“If you’re staying,” Theo insisted quietly, resolutely, “then it’s best you learn empathy.”
Rian sighed painfully. “I was afraid of that.”[/size]